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26 November 2011 @ 08:59 pm
 
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2) In order to screen shot that, I stopped with "The" at the beginning of a new sentence. I got distracted. When I came back I asked aloud, "What was I writing? I just have 'the'." Here is tattooedsappho's suggestion:



(Bad writing is bad writing. I, uh, was going for quantity-over-quality for the last paragraph approaching 30k.) Somehow not quite what I was going for. Although the two (older-lesbian) ladies are about to meet for the first time and they're certainly not going to be footsying/finying around their attraction the way the younger set will be.

And hey, I need to hit a word count. If old lady smut is what I need to do it, then old lady smut there will be.
 
 
 
CaroRulescarorules on November 27th, 2011 05:49 pm (UTC)
Wicked!!!!